11A - IDEA NAPKIN NO. 1
1) Me: Mario Paredes was born in Chile in 1995. After moving to the US at age 12, from Chile he has grown a lot and learned a lot. He lived one year in Germany, where he learned the German language. He now speaks fluently three languages: Spanish, English and German. Other than that, his skills are pretty much the same of an average University of Florida student. He is very good at finding good deals and purchasing good at a low price. He has had the opportunity to travel a lot on his own, where it has lead him to grow a lot as a person, throughout different experiences abroad. He does not enjoy being in his comfort zone as he feels sometimes that drags him down so he needs to be constantly looking for new upcoming challenges. By having traveled so much, and speaking different languages he has been able to detect flaws on international travel. Bringing this experience to create a new airline that starts operating within the Latin American market and especiall...
Mario, I think you did a great job on this pitch. It’s short and to the point, and definitely gets your point across. I liked how you used just the right number of stats to gain the prospective venture capitalist’s interest. I went back and watched your first pitch to compare it with this one. I think you looked very comfortable in this pitch. I also liked how you changed your hook, it really makes an impact, as does the new ending.
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