29A – VENTURE CONCEPT NO. 2
Venture: Blankenese Airlines Opportunity: I see an opportunity in opening a new airline that is top in the airline industry. We want to serve Latin American cities that are often ignored. We want to offer a good service where the comfort of our clients and travelers is the most important feature. We want to provide our customers with a good array of inflight entertainment, new and top of the line aircraft, high-quality food and service, hassle-free booking and wiggle room for luggage and carry on. Innovation: We see that people are becoming more unhappy with the flying and traveling experience. We want to restore this concept by providing something never offered before. It seems now that traveling is more complicated than ever when in reality it should be a lot more simple, exactly how it was years ago. We will make a profit without the airline mainly due to the use of airplanes that are extremely self-sufficient and the operating costs are not too much. We will also charge mo...
Mario, I think you did a great job on this pitch. It’s short and to the point, and definitely gets your point across. I liked how you used just the right number of stats to gain the prospective venture capitalist’s interest. I went back and watched your first pitch to compare it with this one. I think you looked very comfortable in this pitch. I also liked how you changed your hook, it really makes an impact, as does the new ending.
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